一、写作:

  新浪教育[微博]讯
2014年12月20日全国大学英语四级考试开考,本次考试为多题多卷,新浪外语第一时间收集整理不同版本试题,供考生参考,并联系四六级名师第一时间进行真题点评,本文是新东方在线[微博]刘杨对2014年下半年写作《最令人印象深刻的校园活动》的范文及点评:

  My most impressive friends

  新东方在线刘杨老师四级作文范文:

  我印象最深刻的朋友

  The Most Impressive Campus Activity

  北京新东方四六级团队金凌虹范文

  Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enrich
students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I
have benefited a lot from all of these well-organized activities, but
the one impressing me most is the debate competition which I took part
in last year。

  【名师简评】

  That was a debate competition between different majors and the topic
was about theoretical knowledge versus practices. What mattered most is
not the result of the debate, but gathering background information and
practicing the process of debate. Also, no individual could accomplish
the challenging task all by herself or himself, so joint efforts have
played a significant role in winning the competition. Team spirit and
co-operation has been improved a lot and I believe this is more precious
than winning or losing。

  2014年12月20日四级真题,写作部分延续了2014年6月14日四级写作的出题风格,具有以下四大大特点:

  To be brief, we should participate in more campus activities, not
only can we get a better understanding of what we have learnt before,
but also make new friends and discover our interests。

  1.反押题:此次作文,依旧没有考察“热点”的“环境、文化、网络”等大话题,而是“平民草根、接地气”;

  写作思路指导:

  2.易审题:依旧没有考察考生“审题能力”以及“跑题偏题”的可能性,作文的主题非常开放而明显,所有考生都有话好说;

  第一步,确定你印象最深的校园活动是什么。

  3.重语言:主题明确,不会跑题,考生比拼的就是“语言质量”本身了。一篇不再“假大空”的文章,注定不需要使用太多“大而华丽的空洞语言、口号语言”,而在于考生能否灵活运用一些基础词汇和固定表达,写出语法正确、语言流畅的文章。

  第二步,该校园活动主题和内容是什么。

  4.技巧和能力并重:“写作技巧与范文背诵”作文备考思路依旧得到体现和应用。考生既要规律性总结历年真题出题的特点,又要勤加背诵和练习考前的范文。宗旨,多背,多写,背好,写好,总能够在考场上有话好说,有分可拿!

  第三步,活动的启发和影响。

  【参考范文】

  题型不再局限于纯粹的议论文,而是各个文章体裁夹杂和糅合。要对文章的体裁和相应写法有全面的理解和掌握。

  I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted
enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive
friends is my roommate, Li Ming。

 

  In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not
impress us at all. We started to notice him because he was always late
for classes. We were thus impressed by his laziness. I came to know him
and his situation because we were roommates and spent much time
together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his
father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that
shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mother supporting
the whole family. Finally, under great pressures, he balanced his life
and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good care of his
mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row。

  The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of
the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed
a durable influence on me. Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded as
asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own
friends,but we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose
friends who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)

  【参考译文】

  在我的大学生活中,遇到了很多朋友。他们对我的人生产生了重大的影响。然而,我印象最深的朋友是我的室友李明。

  在开学第一天的入学班会上,他没有给全班同学留下任何印象。李明让我们开始认识他,是因为他总是上课迟到,同学们都以为是个懒惰的人。因为我们是室友,平时的交往比较多,后来我才慢慢了解到他的情况:原来他的母亲罹患重病,长期卧床,父亲残忍地离开他们而去,照顾生病的母亲和养家重任只能由他来承担了。令人惊讶的是,在重压之下,他将自己的生活和学业平衡地很好:他不再总是迟到,将妈妈照顾的很好并且连续几年获得奖学金。

  李明的经历是坚持和意志的作用的最有说服力的例子之一。他给我留下的印象无法磨灭,他对我造成的影响持续深远。的确,这样的朋友被视为我们生活中的财富和资产。我们有权利选择自己的朋友,然而交友的过程中,我都应该足够理智和谨慎,选择那些能够给我们带来正能量的真正的朋友。

  The Most Impressing Course in My College Life

  印象最深的一门课

  北京新东方四六级团队赵子凌范文

  During the two years of college life, I have attended many special
courses, among which the most impressed one is psychology. I still
remembered the days when I was fed up with my major Math, which
frustrated me so much. Till I fortunately select one of the most
fascinating optional courses lectured by Professor Wang。

  Time gone back to the first class of Mr. Wang, I found a little old
man came in the classroom with a thick book of psychology. Mysteriously,
I first unveiled and explored the myth within it by the vivid
demonstration of Mr. Wang, and became fascinated with this course. In
the following days, it enclosed an assorted of psychological phenomenon
reflected in ordinary people’s daily lives by illustrating examples in
reality。

  To be frank, it is the psychology class that enlightens my soul of
exploring the unknown world and stimulate my desire to learn. And it is
no surprise to say that psychology is the most impressing course for me
in college。

  最新四级写作点评 :

  今年12月20号的最新四级写作的出题类型延续了6月的形式,较以往更加趋向于灵活性,重点考察的是考生的英语基础知识,不再依赖于过去的传统模版或套句。因此这样的考察形式更需要考生在平时英语的学习过程中去积累,注重英语书面表达运用技巧。而在出题的话题上也更偏向于大学生的校园学习和生活话题,文体形式比较自由。因此建议广大四级考生能通过平时的基础练习和专业课程指导,摒弃模版,达到理想的写作分数。

  The Most Impressive Campus Activity

  印象最深的大学活动

  北京新东方四六级团队刘杨范文

  Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enrich
students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I
have benefited a lot from all of these well-organized activities, but
the one impressing me most is the debate competition which I took part
in last year。

  That was a debate competition between different majors and the topic
was about theoretical knowledge versus practices. What mattered most is
not the result of the debate, but gathering background information and
practicing the process of debate. Also, no individual could accomplish
the challenging task all by herself or himself, so joint efforts have
played a significant role in winning the competition. Team spirit and
co-operation has been improved a lot and I believe this is more precious
than winning or losing。

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