作者:王江涛
2015年6月的大学英语四级、六级考试已全部结束,下面对四级作文的真题命题规律进行解析的同时,对作文逐一进行了解析并提供了参考范文,供广大考生参考。

  PartA 应用文

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an
essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a
brief description of the picture and then comment on parents’ role in
their children’s growth. You should write at least 120 words but no more
than 150 words。

  Write a letterof about 100 words to the president of your university
suggesting how toimprove students physical condition。

澳门微尼斯人手机版 1作文

  Youshould include the details you think necessary。

  命题解析

  Youshould write on the answer sheet。

  本题要求首先描述图画,然后评论家长[微博]在其孩子成长中的作用。图中显示:一位女儿兴高采烈地告诉母亲:“妈妈,好消息!我被您选择的大学录取了。”显而易见,本题的主旨是:父母为子女做出了太多的决定,造成子女缺乏独立。

  Donot sign your own name at the end of letter。

  关于两代关系这一话题,国内写作考试已经多次考察。2003年考研[微博]写作考察图画作文“温室花朵经不起风雨”,即父母溺爱造成子女缺乏独立。2010年12月,四级写作考察“父母如何让孩子独立”。如果之前研究过以上真题,本题易如反掌。

  Donot write the address。

  写作思路:

  【参考范文】

  1、本文首段应简要描述图画,指出有些父母过于包办造成子女缺乏独立。

  Dear Mr.President,

  2、次段写法比较灵活,可以具体分析父母过于包办的原因,也可以进行举例论证。

  Iam a student of our university. I am writing this letter to bring
forwardmultiple and effective suggestions to our college students about
how to improvetheir body health。

  3、尾段最好提出建议措施,呼吁父母放手给孩子自由,而子女应努力寻求独立。

  Initially,exercising, though not a student’s first priority in
his/her daily life, shouldbe stressed by all of us as well as our
university, not only because it isvital to our physical health but
mental health as well. Furthermore, developinga regular and healthy
diet, which provides vitamins and other nutrients to ourbody, would, to
some extent, undoubtedly benefit our body。

  参考范文:

  Ihope that you will find my suggestions useful and propagandas be
launched amongthe students. 

  The drawing vividly reflects a daughter is chatting with her mother
in their house. The eyes sparkling with delight, the daughter tells her
mother, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice。”
Obviously, the implication of the portrayal is that the daughter is lack
of independence due to her mother’s doting care。

  Yourssincerely,

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